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Contest entry: Human Frostbite by Syico

:iconmaiskittlez:
My darling;D I dropped by and saw you wanted a critique c;
Alright, so at first from a glance I thought the background was part of her hair o u o heh I'm blind ;~;
So alright, first thing I look at is the flower since it's at the top. It looks sorta odd, and I don't know if you were trying to do a 3D look, but I'm not sure so I won't say much about it ;w;
Her hair is alright, I like the curly part of it the most. The shading on it is somewhat messy, as in the lines should be smoother and maybe blured/watercolored a tiny bit, not to destroy the shapes of the shading but just so the shading doesn't look messy.
The shading on her face/skin is rather odd. For one, you shaded with a black airbrush I believe, which doesn't really look good. It's better to use skin colors (Here's my personal pallet :D [link] ) to shade, because it shows up better :3 and also, the eyes and mouth are being shaded in weird way :$ I don't think they should be shaded at all. If the mouth has to be shaded, shade the under part.
I like her dress, although those effects on the blue just look like they don't belong ;-; but I do like the color combos ;D
The shoes are sorta just eh. They don't really have a foot shape, and are extremely small. I know it's cartoonish, but I would think they would be a bit bigger ;w;
okey my darling there you go ;D
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
FUUUUUU- ;n; I tried to make the feet LESS cartoony cuz i know you would see this! ESFDGHUJKL *fails*
the thing in her hair I actually have no idea what it is lol it was just there to be there
>_> and I'm experimenting with new shading techniques thus is being SLOOPYMESSYUGLYBAD ;n; has you say M'Dear lol has for the sparkle stuff I though well .3. you know me girl I like mai pic's shiny
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OH AND I use a filter after I'm dine with my lineart witch gives it all a slight glow inside and out with is why its on the eyes and mouth also.
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Maiskittlez Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's okay gurl ;w; they still look better than your regular feets c:
ouu I've seen sorta that style of shading except it was blurred a bit .3.
SHINYYY ;D
oh maybe you should remove the eyes and mouth then and do the filter then paste them back in ;~;
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
or have the eyes and mouth on a diff layer IM BRILLIANT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
and well i could extend the blur a bit cuz I can choose how much it spreads and fades
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Maiskittlez Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOU'RE A TRUE GENIUS RIGHT THERE
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
BWHAHAHAHAHAH MANIACAL LAUGH
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