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 Comments FUUUUUU- ;n; I tried to make the feet LESS cartoony cuz i know you would see this! ESFDGHUJKL *fails*
the thing in her hair I actually have no idea what it is lol it was just there to be there >_> and I'm experimenting with new shading techniques thus is being SLOOPYMESSYUGLYBAD ;n; has you say M'Dear lol has for the sparkle stuff I though well .3. you know me girl I like mai pic's shiny uhhhh OH AND I use a filter after I'm dine with my lineart witch gives it all a slight glow inside and out with is why its on the eyes and mouth also.  It's okay gurl ;w; they still look better than your regular feets c:
ouu I've seen sorta that style of shading except it was blurred a bit .3. SHINYYY ;D oh maybe you should remove the eyes and mouth then and do the filter then paste them back in ;~; |
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Alright, so at first from a glance I thought the background was part of her hair o u o heh I'm blind ;~;
So alright, first thing I look at is the flower since it's at the top. It looks sorta odd, and I don't know if you were trying to do a 3D look, but I'm not sure so I won't say much about it ;w;
Her hair is alright, I like the curly part of it the most. The shading on it is somewhat messy, as in the lines should be smoother and maybe blured/watercolored a tiny bit, not to destroy the shapes of the shading but just so the shading doesn't look messy.
The shading on her face/skin is rather odd. For one, you shaded with a black airbrush I believe, which doesn't really look good. It's better to use skin colors (Here's my personal pallet
I like her dress, although those effects on the blue just look like they don't belong ;-; but I do like the color combos ;D
The shoes are sorta just eh. They don't really have a foot shape, and are extremely small. I know it's cartoonish, but I would think they would be a bit bigger ;w;
okey my darling there you go ;D